I Don't Get It.
It's okay, although I'm a little confused about the overall concept - this seems way too dreary to be a song simply mourning summer. The lyrics aren't great, they'd probably sound better on a more appropriate beat, how long've you guys been spitting?
Anyway, to summerise, the topic is a little misconstrue with the tone of the beat and vocals. I'd also get rid of the lofi effect on the vocals and hit the beat with more feeling, sounds simple but take my word for it, it'll make a world of difference, get intouch if you want to talk about it some more - got a track on my page for you to check out, same sorta theme; I guess.