TheRealMoosecake's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pointlessness]

Not Bad.

"Omnipotent, omnipresent, omni-everything you need
Probably hellbent on destruction, and if so I will succeed"

My favorite few lines, not a bad track at all. There was something about the delivery that gave me the urge to knock it down a few ratings, it's just a small pet peeve of mine. How long you been doing this?

StarF68 responds:

Glad you liked it! Yeah I could have upped my delivery on this one, but I kinda just wrote it and recorded it in an hour for the lulz. Heh. :D

I technically started in 2006, but it's only been within maybe the last year or year and a half that I've really started to dedicate more time and focus to it. :)

[the Weed Rap]

Keep It Real...

I'll let you off because it was your first attempt, I did the same thing when I started, try and avoid stuff like 'cruising in my cadillac, got my bitches in the back'. I'm all for tracks about weed, but keep it real, relax a little when you write and don't feel like you have to fill other rappers shoes with your content. Keep it real and true to yourself throughout, and eventually you'll regret ever rhyming like some half-arsed mainstream pushover.

Put some more feeling in your voice (don't overdo it) and find your 'rap tone' and start getting comfortable with it. Attack that beat like you mean it, don't be shy.

If you need any more advice, just message me mate, always good to see now artists.

w0lv3rine responds:

hell yeah man, I'm down for any advice you have to give

[Wyze ft Greeksta -Darkest Hour]

3rd Verse.

Got a verse perfect for this, check out the tracks I've uploaded on here on youtube Hizkit and let me know if we can work something out buddy.

Blasphem-E responds:

go for it dude

[-- [Kos] 2014]

Deeeeep.

Keep it up, this is really good.

Kosmiker responds:

Thank you :)

[Keep on Rolling]

Pretty Dope

Nice stuff man, nice flow, sick beat. Your number 1 spot was well deserved. If you're ever looking for a spitter to fill a verse on another Newgrounds submission, send me a message, got an upload on my page. Check me out mate, keep it up.

glitchs2d responds:

You got flow dude if I got something then I'll let you know

[[AK-49] Summer is Over]

I Don't Get It.

It's okay, although I'm a little confused about the overall concept - this seems way too dreary to be a song simply mourning summer. The lyrics aren't great, they'd probably sound better on a more appropriate beat, how long've you guys been spitting?

Anyway, to summerise, the topic is a little misconstrue with the tone of the beat and vocals. I'd also get rid of the lofi effect on the vocals and hit the beat with more feeling, sounds simple but take my word for it, it'll make a world of difference, get intouch if you want to talk about it some more - got a track on my page for you to check out, same sorta theme; I guess.

AK-49 responds:

thanks for the review im gonna check out ur track now lol.
and this was our first real song, without fooling around (the song "locked up" and 2 unuploaded tracks had all come before and all 3 aren't serious) so it's pretty surprising to be on the front page.

[TiGeR - Susurration]

Well, that's a 10.

Deep stuff mate. Really digging this and that's coming from someone losing hope in drum & bass given how saturated the genre's getting. With your permission I'd like to try putting some vocals to this on my day off on Thursday, experimenting with a lot of stuff right now and if I could make my voice work on this I think I could have this played at quite a few events I'm arranging.

Get back to me man, one of my tracks is waiting to be approved, shall be on my page soon.

TiGeR responds:

Glad you appreciate the song!

That's a cool idea :). Well, I guess I'm alright with it as long as you give proper credit for the music. But first of all I'd like some more information about the whole remixing-thingy. So if you could PM me we could start discussing this further :)

Thanks!

~TiGeR