TheRealMoosecake's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[the Weed Rap]

Keep It Real...

I'll let you off because it was your first attempt, I did the same thing when I started, try and avoid stuff like 'cruising in my cadillac, got my bitches in the back'. I'm all for tracks about weed, but keep it real, relax a little when you write and don't feel like you have to fill other rappers shoes with your content. Keep it real and true to yourself throughout, and eventually you'll regret ever rhyming like some half-arsed mainstream pushover.

Put some more feeling in your voice (don't overdo it) and find your 'rap tone' and start getting comfortable with it. Attack that beat like you mean it, don't be shy.

If you need any more advice, just message me mate, always good to see now artists.

w0lv3rine responds:

hell yeah man, I'm down for any advice you have to give

[Yun - Eddie's Song]

Has Anyone Spat On This?

My goodness son! I have to wreck this!

[Chilled Back Attack (YunVeroz)]

THAT BEAAAAT.

That beat is the dopest shit I've heard in a good while. Like the lyrics too, made me laugh.

'Go ahead, do all you can to attack me,
It's not very effective, I lost 1 HP!'

Dopeness, keep it real, and let me know if you ever want me to push some jokey rhymes on something like this.

The-toad411 responds:

Thanks for the review dude. I'll hit you up for sure if you want to try bein silly. I'm workin on some stuff right now, so I'll know soon. Peace dude.

~T.R.E~

[Wyze ft Greeksta -Darkest Hour]

3rd Verse.

Got a verse perfect for this, check out the tracks I've uploaded on here on youtube Hizkit and let me know if we can work something out buddy.

Blasphem-E responds:

go for it dude

[+- Bubble Gloop Swamp -+]

More Win.

Aslong as you stick with BK, you're not going to make a bad song. That's a promise. Heck - if you ever do a hip-hop remix, let me know. ;)

[-- [Kos] 2014]

Deeeeep.

Keep it up, this is really good.

Kosmiker responds:

Thank you :)

[Malevolent Mansion (B-Kazooie)]

Well...

Because B-K has the best soundtrack of any game, ever, with no arguments, this is an insta-10.

[The Central (loop)]

Powww.

Definite 10. I'd love to spit on this.

[Flo Sickly (DMZguy)]

Carried By The Beat

Got excited when I heard the beat, the lyrics and flow kinda killed it though bruv. Attacking the vocals harder might clear this problem up but that might not be easy with your current mic. Try rapping a little futher away from the mic and putting more power on the vocals and then turn them down. That'll make this a much better track.

That beat is fucking sick though.

The-toad411 responds:

Yaa man. Props on DMZ for that beat. I was just messing around with little freestyled parts. I was basically whispering into the mic as my baby was sleepin in the next room. Don't worry though. I got something in the mix right now. MUCH better quality of music. Thanks for listening and the very honest and helpful review.

Peace,
~T.R.E~

[Keep on Rolling]

Pretty Dope

Nice stuff man, nice flow, sick beat. Your number 1 spot was well deserved. If you're ever looking for a spitter to fill a verse on another Newgrounds submission, send me a message, got an upload on my page. Check me out mate, keep it up.

glitchs2d responds:

You got flow dude if I got something then I'll let you know